Romance of the Wolves

[LupeFanBoy8744]

Ok, I hope this is all right. It is not strictly SatAM, but it is based on it. Essentially, it is my own version of Sonic. In it, my character Obi Wolf is king, with Lupe as his wife and queen. They are madly in love, hence this. Feel free to tell me where I can improve, just be polite about it. Also, feel free to ask about the writing style. Enjoy!
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Romance of the Wolves

Obi

Lupe

My wife, my queen

My greatest friend

Fairest and most glorious of all she-wolves

Eyes like sapphires

Flowing, long, silken hair the color of a midnight sky

Fur of silver and white

Our mothers brought us into this world on the same day

As pups, you were my best friend

As young adults, we came to fall in love

I look at you now

My glorious jewel

My royal darling


Lupe

Obi

My love, my king

Once, you were the greatest of princes

Now, you are the highest of kings

Your eyes gleam like fire

Your fur is like the black of the depths of the sea

Who would dare to stir your kingly rage?

No one, if they are smart

Looking into your eyes is like looking at a living embodiment of might and power

Such is your glorious might

My mighty king

[Lynchenberg]

Needs more cowbell.